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Chan-Seung Lee
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 9:51 pm Post subject: when |
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In the below, I made some sentences, so I'd like you to correct them if not correct.
1) It is best to plan when times are good for the times that may be bad.
2) It is best to plan when you go to New York in advance.
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Mister Micawber

Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 774 Location: Yokohama
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 12:45 am Post subject: |
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Place your modifiers closer to their referents:
2) It is best to plan in advance when you go to New York.
. _________________ "I really do not know that anything has ever been more exciting than diagramming sentences." � Gertrude Stein
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