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Swim4life
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 Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:27 pm Post subject: Is it well written? |
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I enjoy teaching my student good English through some inspiring stuff (that's a good way to learn and teach English). The following is what I will be using in my upcoming class. I'm wondering if it's well written or grammatically correct...I understand it's not written by a native English speaker. Please help me out, and that'll be especially great if you could rewrite based on the following paragraph. Thanks a billion!
"I believe the greatest job is when you can�t tell the difference between work and recreation, and the best leaders are those who absolutely love what they�re doing. Why shouldn�t life be about doing what you love? If you don�t enjoy what you�re doing, how can you be really good at it?" |
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damon@English24/7
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| Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 10:52 pm Post subject: |
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It looks fine. The only change I would make is "I believe the greatest job is the one where..."
You must have interesting classes.
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Swim4life
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Thanks Damon. Can I say "I believe the greatest job is the one in which..." ?
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damon@English24/7
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| Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 11:41 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, that will work too.
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