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gloria_taipei
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 Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 8:27 pm Post subject: Please look at this dialog I wrote. Thank you. |
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Teacher: Time for class, everyone. Please come inside in ten seconds.
Class leader, please count down.
Class Leader: Ten-Nine-Eight-Seven-Six-Five-Four-Three-Two-One-Zero.
Time�s up.
Is that dialog good? Do I need to change anything to make it better? Thank you for your help. |
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Anuradha Chepur
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| Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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Good job Gloria  . |
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gloria_taipei
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Thank you, Dr. Chepur.  |
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