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[Crisi]

Dear teachers,

Is this sentence correct, or how would you say it?

This is a feeling, once you discovered it, you'll never miss again!

I'd really be grateful for your suggestions.

Crisi

[lotus]

Hi Crisi,

Try:

It's a great feeling. Once you try it, you'll never go back!

It's a once-in-a-lifetime experience!

It's a great feeling! Once you discover it, you'll never try anything else.

It's a great feeling. Once you have it in your heart, you'll never want to lose it.


--lotus
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