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[henrywu]

To Whom It May Concern:

This is Henry from XXXXX. As I know, your company is one of the biggest importer in UK. It is so good to hear about that.

My company is one of the biggest computer leading companies in Asia and we have five factories to manufacture computers efficiently. We are highly interested in having business opportunities with your company. If you are interested in business opportunities with us. Please contact me at [email protected]

Thanks for your time and attention.

Best regard

Hank

[Mister Micawber]

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Hank, it needs a lot more work and a lot more professionalism if you intend to gain corporate customers. Here is a bare beginning:


Mr. A. B. Smith
Purchasing Manager
ABC Company
London, UK

Dear Mr. Smith:

XYZ Company is one of the biggest computer companies in Asia, with five factories manufacturing computers efficiently. We are highly interested in initiating a business relationship with your company.

Enclosed please find our most recent catalogues and brochures, and I encourage you to explore our website at http://www.computerunion.com. If you have further questions, please feel free to contact me at [email protected]

Thank you very much for your time and attention.

Sincerely yours,

Henry Wu
Export Sales Division
Computer Union
Shanghai, China

encl: Sales brochure, etc.
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