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Junkomama
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 Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 3:40 pm Post subject: learn from |
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Hello, teachers.
Is the following sentences acceptable?
Ino Tadataka made a survey of entire Japan's coastline traveling on foot.
I'd like to learn from his perseverance and eagerness for his work . |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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| Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:30 pm Post subject: |
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I would revise the sentences thus:
Ino Tadataka, traveling on foot, made a survey of Japan's entire coastline.
I'd like to learn from his perseverance and passion for his work.
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Junkomama
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| Posted: Sat Oct 21, 2006 3:27 am Post subject: |
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Hello, CP-san.
Thank you very much for your reply!
Regards,
JUnkomama |
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