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henrywu
Joined: 17 Oct 2006 Posts: 11
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 6:27 am Post subject: Which one is correct ? |
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A) My freind like this kind of cell-phone, but not its color. Please showme another three cell-phones in blue, red, and blakc seperately.
B) My freind like this type of cellphone, but not its color. Please show me anothre three cell-phones individually in blue, red, and black.
(( Please tell one whihc one is better and makes more sense) |
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asterix
Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654
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Posted: Sun Oct 29, 2006 11:12 am Post subject: |
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A) My friend likes this kind of cell-phone, but not its color. Please show me another three cell-phones in blue, red, and black.
I've deleted separately, which you don't need, and corrected your typos. (typing mistakes)
You could also say, Please show me some more phones in red, blue, or black. |
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