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On China�s Entry into WTO

There are never unanimous opinions among people as to China�s entry into WTO. Some people believe that it is a good opportunity for China�s reforming and opening-up, while others argue that we will have to face up to much challenges if we do so. Personally, I think that China�s entry into WTO is like a double-edged sward, and we should make the best use of one edge, and should not be hurt by the other.

I am of this opinion because I think that we can take advantage of the conveniences of WTO to develop ourselves. For example, according to WTO principles, tariff walls should gradually cancelled in the end, when our Chinese can enjoy the equal condition to make trade with other countries. It�s also true that, on the other hand, with China�s opening-up and development of international trade, we are increasingly exposed to the environment of Globalization and more likely to be threatened by the bad effect, such as some kinds of risks, economic safety.

It follows, then, that China�s entry into WTO may have two effects on us. And it is advisable that we should always be prepared for the increasingly changing world with open mind and, in the meantime make use of its good effect and avoid the bad effect. Otherwise, we can never keep pace with the world and also never catch up with the developed countries.

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There are never unanimous opinions among people as to China�s entry into the WTO. Some people believe that it is a good opportunity for China to change and to open up, while others argue that we will have to face up to many challenges if we do so. Personally, I think that China�s entry into the WTO is like a double-edged sword; we should make the best use of one edge, and should be careful not to be hurt by the other.

I am of this opinion because I think that we can take advantage of the conveniences of the WTO to develop ourselves. For example, according to WTO principles, tariff walls should be gradually reduced until they are cancelled. When that happens, we Chinese can enjoy free trade with other countries.
On the other hand, it�s also true that, with China�s opening up, and the development of international trade, we are increasingly exposed to the effects of globalization, and more likely to be threatened by some kinds of risks, such as downturns in the economy.
It follows, then, that China�s entry into the WTO may have two effects on us ,so we should always view the increasingly changing world with open minds, and, in the meantime, make use of its good effects and avoid its bad effects. Otherwise, we can never keep pace with the world and also can never catch up with the developed countries.