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F4 ( Flower 4 )

Hana is a quite girl, she study in a Mize primary school. One day she was setting in her class, she was sad; because in the school all student's are rich; only she is from poor family. As a result of that, her family helped her to study in this school, for example, at the meal time the family divide the food between them, to save more money to pay their daughter's school fees. One day, four boys came to school called ( F4 ) . To be more specific four flower. This group made noise there. After that, all student wait in the school cafeteria to see what will these boys are going to do each week.
For example, F4 group choose one boy or girl to make a fun on him or her. One day, Hana was sitting in the cafeteria with her friend eating lunch. After that, Sara went to bring juice for her and Hana. Suddenly she hit the F4 group Boos (Jun).
He shouted at her face and said ''are you blind '' . Then Hana saw that she hurry to Jun and said to him Let Sara leave. Next day, when Hana went to open her locker, she saw a Red card in the locker, that means F4 group choose her today to make fun on her. So all student in the school start making fun on her. Then ( Roi ) who is one of the F4 group said " Let Hana Go " . After that . all student's let her to go. In the same time Hana fall in love with Roi.
Roi is a lonely person, quite and from a rich family, he has a girl friend who traveled to France to complete her study.
Next day when Hana was in cafeteria start to eat her lunch. The Boos of F4 (Jun) throw her food and step on it, then Han stare at Jun, and said stopped, " Don�t think if you have money; you can do what ever you wont " .
Then Hana come front him and slap Jun that make him full down .



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[alper]

hi my friend,

is this your own prose? the things you are telling us are nice. but I think, this prose need to be edited
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[black sea]

Thank you for your replly


and what you ask about it
is this your own prose?


Actually this is a series I saw and I liked it and I
wanted to share it with all of you


I hope you liked, & I'm going to completed soon

[alper]

hi my friend,

A prose is an ordinary speech or writing...

I wanted to mean that, "did you write it"


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[black sea]

hi friend,

What I wrote is a story of J/ serial.