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soon0608
Joined: 08 Nov 2005 Posts: 21
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 3:46 pm Post subject: Questions |
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Hello
i have a few difficult questions for Toefl.
please, let me know them. thank you in advance.
1.A microphone enables a soft tone to be amlified,thus makikng it possible the gentle renditions of romantic love songs in a large hall.
2.Physical fitness activities can lead to an alarming variety of injuries if participants push themselves greatly hard. |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006 Posts: 2875 Location: California
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 9:49 am Post subject: |
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I would revise them to read:
1. A microphone allows a soft tone to be amplified, thus making it possible to hear the gentle renditions of romantic love songs in a large hall.
2. Physical fitness activities can lead to an alarming variety of injuries if the participants push themselves too hard. _________________ You live a new life for every new language you speak. -Czech proverb |
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Bob S.

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Posts: 1767 Location: So. Cal
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 1:28 pm Post subject: Re: Questions |
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soon0608 wrote: |
1.A microphone enables a soft tone to be amlified,thus makikng it possible the gentle renditions of romantic love songs in a large hall. |
A microphone enables a soft tone to be amlified, thus making the gentle renditions of romantic love songs in a large hall possible. |
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