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LunaCat
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Location: Italy
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 Posted: Thu Nov 23, 2006 6:02 am Post subject: teacher can you correct this please |
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Teacher can you correct this please:
Hi Michael, i'm returned now from Swiss , the time was really good , the sun heated every house in the city , the sons of the city was really nice and the girls too.
I write this letter for tell you that my sister has in love for you..... |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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Location: California
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I would edit it to read:
Hi, Michael, I'm back from / I've returned from Switzerland. I had a really good time. The sun heated every house in the city -- can you believe it? The people in the city were really nice, too.
I write this letter to tell you that my sister has fallen in love with you.....
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