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welkins2139
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 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:27 am Post subject: excited |
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John was excited about that he was going to be a father. He was running to get to the hospital. His wife was giving birth to their first born child. It took her five hours to labor the child. Then the nurse wrapped around the baby.
Are they correct?
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Mary W. Ng
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:45 am Post subject: Re: excited |
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John was excited about that he was going to be a father. He was running to get to the hospital. His wife was giving birth to their first born child. It took her five hours to labor the child. Then the nurse wrapped around the baby.
Are they correct?
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Hi welkins2139,
I hope you like my changes.
John was excited that he was going to be a father. He was running to get to the hospital. His wife was giving birth to their first child. Her labour took five hours. Then the nurse wrapped the baby in a blanket. 
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