welkins2139
Joined: 29 Mar 2006
Posts: 252
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 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 9:55 am Post subject: city |
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When John came into the city, he met a few people. They all got impressive degrees on paper but they barely paid their rent. He met Jane first who was a journalist, Smith, accountant; Smith introduced his brother Joe who was a musican to John. They all lived in the city downtown.
Are they correct?
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Eric Thompson
Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Posts: 148
Location: Angeles, Pampanga, Philippines
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| Posted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 6:03 am Post subject: |
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| Hey again, Welkins, 1st sentence is fine. 2nd sentence: change "got" to "had". 3rd sentence: put "then" before "Smith" and "an" before "accountant", then change the semi-colon to a period. Then put a comma before and after "... who was a musician...". Last sentence is OK, but all downtowns are in cities, so you can just say "downtown", and take out "in the city". OK? |
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