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tisogai
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 Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 10:34 pm Post subject: Benjamin Flanklin |
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Please analize the sentences below and make corrections if any. Also please suggest better/alternative phrases. Thanks so much.
Benjamin Flanklin is the first person that relized American Dream. His life teaches us that no matter how much obstacles there are, as long as you make efforts, anyone can be successful. |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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Location: California
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| Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 11:11 pm Post subject: |
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I would edit it to read:
Benjamin Franklin is the first person who realized the American Dream. His life teaches us that no matter how many obstacles there are, anyone who tries can be successful.
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