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Can you correct this sentences if there are errors please?

 
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LunaCat



Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Posts: 27
Location: Italy

PostPosted: Tue Dec 26, 2006 3:17 pm    Post subject: Can you correct this sentences if there are errors please? Reply with quote

We have talking about our life , but without result.
We'll try to exit of this situation, but I think that it was hardest.
while I'm writing this sentences, I think:" what happen to me?" but I haven't answered to this...
But let's go with order, we were happy until a little time ago but after I don't know what....It's changed all. (or anything it's changed)


My favorite style of music It's that from disco played by GIGI D'AGOSTINO a famous italian DJ.
I listening also "normal" music , pop music ecc. ecc.
I send you this love song called "L'AMOUR TOJOURS" it's very amazing , listen to it. I've attached it in this mail.
My city it's LIVORNO in the center of ITALY . If I should describe this town ,I'd say that It's very calm and above all without delinquency that It's one of big problems of my country.
There's a wonderful sea with a moderate climate in the winter, in the summer instead the climate it's very hot , about 35-40�.
tell me what you think about the song...
see ya ..
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LunaCat



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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