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Barbirolli
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 Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 8:10 am Post subject: Are these correct?? |
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Hello. teachers!
Could you check to see if the sentences are cerret ,please?
1 The shop is always crowded that it is hard to move about.
2 That railway station gets very crowded on weekdays. So it is pretty hard to get on and off. |
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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Location: California
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1. I would change it to read: "The shop is always so crowded that it is hard to move about." Or: "The shop is always crowded, so it is hard to move about."
2. "That railway station gets very crowded on weekdays. So it is pretty hard to get on and off." Fine as is.
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