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[stevenukd]

Dear Teachers,

- Is the CV below ok to write?

* Working experiences:

- A designer for Tuong Nguyen Printing company in 6 months. A designer for Link4 advertising company in 4 years. At the beginning of August I moved to work for the company Applie Business Solution as a supervisor. I have good relations with these customers: Unilever, Dutch Lady and CoCa Cola.

- My work at Link4 was to design and check file 2D, and supervise the manufacturing according to the right designing draft. Co-ordinate with the customer room to hold events and customer meetings.

- My work at Applie Business Solution was to look for and take care of customers. Keep track of and do advertising programs.

* Personal information:

- I'm active, hard-working, and easily get used to new environments. I can communicate well. I have. With my ability, experiences and good disciplines I believe that I will finish well all the work and targets that your company requires.

- I look forward to receiving your reply. And I hope I will soon be one of company's staffs to develope my career and stablelize my life.


Thanks a lot to Teachers,

Stevenukd

[Bob S.]

Try this:

Work experience:
August 2006 to present:
Supervisor of Customer Support at Applied Business Solutions involved in advertising programs where I established good relations with international clients such as Unilever, Dutch Lady and CoCa Cola.

September 2002 to September 2006:
Designer at Link4, an advertising company, where my duties included designing and checking 2D design files, supervising manufacturing quality assurance, and coordinating with Customer Support in arranging on-site customer meetings.

February 2002 to August 2002:
Designer for Tuong Nguyen Printing company.

Personal information:
I'm active, hard-working, and easily adapt to new environments. I have exellent communication skills as well. I have good discipline that I believe will work well at helping me achieve corporate targets to meet your customer requirements.

I look forward to receiving your reply and discussing with you further how my skills and experience might best serve your company and pursue my career as a member of your staff.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

Steven ....