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stevenukd
Joined: 13 Nov 2005 Posts: 324
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 7:52 am Post subject: ABOUT LOVE |
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Dear Teachers,
1. I have forgotten about her eighty percents. I don't wanna be hurt in love any more.
2. Don't worry too much about love, what will come will come. No one knows whether you will find a girl better than her.
- Are these natural to say?
Thanks a lot to Teachers,
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006 Posts: 2875 Location: California
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:38 pm Post subject: |
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Not quite natural to say as written. I would recommend rewording this way.
1. I have forgotten about her, for the most part -- maybe eighty percent. I don't want to be hurt in love any more.
2. Don't worry too much about love. What will come will come. No one knows whether you will find a girl better than her.
If written rather than spoken, they would be a little different.
Hope this helps, Steven. _________________ You live a new life for every new language you speak. -Czech proverb |
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