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stevenukd
Joined: 13 Nov 2005 Posts: 324
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 4:35 pm Post subject: NOT OUTDATED |
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Dear Teachers,
1. Don't be so outdated like that. You should change your way of thinking.
2. If two people love each other truly. Then their having a baby before marriage is very normal.
- Are these natural to say?
Thanks a lot to Teachers,
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 9:22 pm Post subject: |
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1. I think it'd be more natural if you delete "like that." The rest is fine.
2. I'd move "truly" to the left of "love" and make it one sentence. The rest is fine. ("If two people truly love each other...") |
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