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[Swim4life]

Please let me know if the following sounds natural and like good English. If not, could you please polish it for me? It'll be used at my website.

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Welcome to A COMPANY (formerly known as B COMPANY), a full-service translation company committed to providing you with the best in translation and simultaneous interpretation. Since 1994 the then B COMPANY has been specializing in multilanguage translation and interpretation into Chinese and from Chinese into the world's other major languages, while persisting in our efforts for continuous improvement.

As a leading translation solution provider based in Shanghai, the most exciting and prosperous city in China, A COMPANY is known in the China translation market for our ability to perform high quality translations. And what sets us apart is our commitment to working only with the top translators and simultaneous interpreters. For these reasons, over 90% of our new customers come recommended by other satisfied customers and friends.

We aim to impress you more through our works than by words. If you are looking for high quality translation services in the Shanghai or China translation market, look no further...A COMPANY is right here!

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Thanks a billion for your help in advance. Please email me at [email protected] to advise what I can do for you in return.

[patsteck]

Hi-I think your use of English is very good. I see no obvious grammatical errors. You could say "what sets us apart from our competitors is.....", but you don't have to, as it is implied. Will you lose the word "then" in the 2nd sentence when you insert the name of the B Company? I don't think you'll need it. Really, it looks very good and natural to me.