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stevenukd
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 Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 2:09 am Post subject: PATIENTS TREAMENT |
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Dear Teachers,
1. I can aply what I studied for patients treament, besides I can guarantee my life right with my conscience. I don't want to choose medical branch because my health is not good for continuous night shift.
2. I only study more English and chinese. Besides I read more books at home by myself about the fields that I'm interested in.
- Are these grammatical to write?
Thanks a lot to Teachers,
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pugachevV
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1. I can apply what I learned to patients' treatment, also I can live my life according to the dictates of my conscience, but I don't want to choose medicine because a permanent night shift would not be good for my health.
2.I'm only studying English and Chinese, but I read books at home about fields that interest me.
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