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In Chapter two of Mad Cowboy, Howard F, Lyman tell us that animals have more concentrated, which harms people when they eat them. First, Lyman illustrates that animal-based diet is primary matefactor of heart disease. He also provides many studies
Evidenced that vegetarian can effect to prevent heart disease, hypertension, diabetes, and breast cancer. Next, Lyman details that people get more calcium from variety of calcium-rich vegetarian that is the best way to prevent osteoporosis. Then Lyman telling us about chicken and fish are not low-cholesterol food. People usually misunderstand that is health food. He suggests that people use agricultural surplus to give the hungry people is better than it gives feed the cattle. Lyman attacks that smoker is as unhealthy some as meat-eater. He also appeals people become vegetarian.
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