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Chan-Seung Lee
Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 1032
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Posted: Fri May 11, 2007 12:59 am Post subject: now |
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Now that her father was dead, she had to give up the idea of going on to college. |
Does the quote make sense? I think that 'the present tense' or 'the present perfect tense' should come after 'now that clause'.
Therefore, I think that 'Because her father was dead, she had to give up the idea of going on to college.' is better than the quote. But I'm not sure.
Can you tell me if I'm wrong and why I'm wrong?
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Mister Micawber

Joined: 23 Mar 2006 Posts: 774 Location: Yokohama
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 6:18 am Post subject: |
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Well, the quote is quite normal. 'Now' is a relative 'now', a narrative 'now', rather than an absolute 'now'.
That's the best explanation I can manage.
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CP
Joined: 12 Jun 2006 Posts: 2875 Location: California
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Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 7:42 am Post subject: |
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Stories are told in the past tense, so it is correct as written. If you were talking about someone you know, telling your friend about her, you might say, "Now that her father is dead, she has to give up the idea of going on to college." But telling it in a story, unless you are quoting someone speaking (as I just did), you have to put it in the past tense, because everything you write must have occurred before you could write it.
Five hundred years ago, French and English stories were written in a careless mishmash of present tense and past tense, with no real rules about when to use which. They are hard for the modern reader to follow. Eventually, the use of the past tense won out, probably because switching back and forth was confusing and sticking with the present tense is too hard. _________________ You live a new life for every new language you speak. -Czech proverb |
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