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[Rioxn]

Hi, I have some students writing English like this:

"Nowadays, a hot and important controversy centers on the problem that whether students should wear uniform. A fair proportion of people contend that wearing uniform is necessary for school to manage, other people, nevertheless, advocate that students have the freedom to refuse wearing uniforms. As far as I am concerned, I side with the latter .Of the countless reasons or facts that can strengthen my viewpoints, I will present the most consequential and conspicuous ones here."

Can any one help me to improve the expression and correct errors, if any?

Thanks!

[asterix]

There is a controversy as to whether students should wear uniform.
Some contend that wearing uniform is necessary for school discipline. Others say that students should have the freedom to refuse to wear uniforms.
I side with the latter .
Here are the most important and obvious reasons why.

[Lorikeet]

[Rioxn]

thank you!