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b7lake
Joined: 30 Apr 2006 Posts: 181
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 6:38 am Post subject: arouse / arise |
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#-We can only try to analyze and reconstruct human history on the basis
of the records and evidence that have been preserved on one form or
another. And this is where the controversial aspects of history arouse
and provoke us.
(1)Can a verb 'arise' be used instead of 'arouse' in this sentence?
(2)Could you give me some examples that show the usage of
the verb 'arise' and 'arouse'?
I'd really appreciate your help![/b] |
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lotus

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Lorikeet

Joined: 08 Oct 2005 Posts: 1877 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 11:16 am Post subject: |
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Although Lotus is no doubt correct, that sentence doesn't sound good to me, and I would much prefer "arise", perhaps because it already has the "provoke us" part, which takes care of the stimulation. |
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wintersweet
Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 35 Location: San Francisco Bay Area, USA
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Posted: Sat Jul 14, 2007 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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"Arouse and provoke us" is a little redundant, but I don't think "arise" will work because it is an intransitive verb. _________________ wintersweet
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Lorikeet

Joined: 08 Oct 2005 Posts: 1877 Location: San Francisco
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Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:14 pm Post subject: |
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wintersweet wrote: |
"Arouse and provoke us" is a little redundant, but I don't think "arise" will work because it is an intransitive verb. |
"This is where the controversial aspects of history arise
and provoke us."
"This is where the controversial aspects of history arise." sounds fine to me. It can't be intransitive? The second part is that the controversial aspects of history provoke us. I'm sorry I don't understand the problem. |
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Philo Kevetch
Joined: 01 Feb 2006 Posts: 564
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Posted: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:07 pm Post subject: |
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Although it may be possible to preserve the records and evidence
of human history 'on' one form or another, perhaps preserved 'in' one
form or another is what is meant (?).
If you use 'arise', what you are saying is that the 'controversial aspects'
come from/are due to.. having only various preserved records/evidence.
It seems entirely reasonable to say 'arouse and provoke' without
redundancy, if that clearly expresses your meaning.
1- We will deal with the problems as they arise.
2- An increase in taxes is sure to arouse a protest among the citizens. |
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lotus

Joined: 25 Jan 2004 Posts: 862
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Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:47 am Post subject: |
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Hi b7lake,
To avoid ambiguity, I would re-write the paragraph as:
We can only analyze and reconstruct human history on the basis of records and evidence that have been preserved in various forms. Some of these forms contain controversial aspects of history that may arouse or provoke us.
--lotus _________________ War does not make one great --Yoda |
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wintersweet
Joined: 03 Jun 2007 Posts: 35 Location: San Francisco Bay Area, USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:29 pm Post subject: |
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Lorikeet wrote: |
wintersweet wrote: |
"Arouse and provoke us" is a little redundant, but I don't think "arise" will work because it is an intransitive verb. |
"This is where the controversial aspects of history arise
and provoke us."
"This is where the controversial aspects of history arise." sounds fine to me. It can't be intransitive? The second part is that the controversial aspects of history provoke us. I'm sorry I don't understand the problem. |
Ah, we're interpreting the sentence differently. My interpretation was "This is where the controversial aspects of history arouse us and provoke us." I guess it depends on the writer's intended meaning. Yours makes sense too.  _________________ wintersweet
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