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stevenukd
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 Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 10:57 pm Post subject: FIANCEE |
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Dear Teachers,
1. All I do is just because of my fiancee, I just want us to have a prosperous life afterwards.
- Is this ok to say?
Thanks so much!
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ad-miral
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| Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 7:45 am Post subject: |
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 these words could have come out from my mouth.
The first "just" could have been left away, I think. It's a bit disturbing with just because... just want...
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iitimone7
Joined: 09 Aug 2005
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Location: Indiana, USA
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| Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 10:12 am Post subject: just because |
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how about this?
everything i do is because of my fiance'. I just want to have a prosperous life after we are married. |
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