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[MayWang]

Can anyone help me to check this writing? Following is part of my promotional letter.
"Our company is a prestigious manufacturer of tea in Taiwan. We have been engaging in this field for 100 years. To pursue the best quality, we have received a ISO-9002 certificate and a �Golden Tea Award� in China. In addition, all of our products are organic. With these benefits, many beverage companies such as Coca Cola, Whittard of Chelsea have been adopting our tea as their product resources since 2000. From this year, we have set up our own export department. We now export our products directly, which we believe it will be more favorable for both of us. "

Many thanks!
May

[cgage2]

Our company is a prestigious manufacturer of tea in Taiwan. We have been engaging in this field for 100 years. To pursue(Because we have pursued) the best quality, we have received an ISO-9002 certificate and a �Golden Tea Award� in China. In addition, all of our products are organic. Because of these awards and benefits, many beverage companies such as Coca Cola, and Whittard of Chelsea have been adopting our tea as their product resources since 2000. In that year, we set up our own export department. We now export our products directly, which we believe will be more favorable for everyone concerned."