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Jerry Chen



Joined: 26 Jan 2006
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:16 am    Post subject: Need help from native English speakers Reply with quote

Hello,


Please read the following sentence:

Kathy didn't have any money to buy the books because she had lost her wallet.

If the above sentence is changed to:

Having lost her wallet, Kathy didn't have any money to buy the books.

Kathy didn't have any money to buy the books, having lost her wallet.

Which one is correct? Or both of them are correct?


Thanks for your help.
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cgage2



Joined: 11 Jun 2007
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Location: US

PostPosted: Fri Sep 07, 2007 7:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The first one is the simplest and best
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CP



Joined: 12 Jun 2006
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 08, 2007 7:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Between the two sentences, the first is better because the participial phrase "having lost her wallet" is next to the word it actually modifies / refers to, namely, Kathy.

"Having lost her wallet, Kathy didn't have any money to buy the books."

In your second sentence, the phrase modifies / refers to the books, which is incorrect:

"Kathy didn't have any money to buy the books, having lost her wallet."

The books didn't lose Kathy's wallet, Kathy did.
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