Jerry Chen
 
 
  Joined: 26 Jan 2006 Posts: 115
 
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				 Posted: Sun Sep 09, 2007 10:58 pm    Post subject: Need help from native English speakers | 
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				Hello,
 
 
Please read the following sentences:
 
 
1. While I was opening the mail, the sharp paper cut my finger.
 
 
2. When I was sitting outside at the cafe, the rain began to fall.
 
 
Can they be changed as follows?
 
 
1. I opening the mail, the sharp mpaper cut my finger.
 
 
2. I sitting outside at the cafe, the rain began to fall.
 
 
 
Thanks for your help.[/b] | 
			 
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