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secjill
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 Posted: Mon Sep 24, 2007 12:13 am Post subject: Is this a good sentence |
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There are always things which you can do nothing with but accept, and you can never change them.
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Hi teachers
Do you see any problems with the sentence above?
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myprofe
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You wrote: There are always things which you can do nothing with but accept, and you can never change them.
I would rewrite the sentence as follows:
There will always be things which/that you can do nothing about other than accept them. You can never change them.
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secjill
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| Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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| thank you for your kind reply, I really appreciate it |
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