Dave's ESL Cafe's Student Discussion Forums

[muni]

1) I have just read about your unit on internet,and I have found it very intresting

2) I would have visited you personally but I am not in Americam so I am writing this mail

[bud]

1. "... on THE internet,.."

I'm not sure if unit is the best choice of words. It depends on what the unit is. For example, a department of a company is often called a unit. Then it would be a good choice.

typo correction: interesting

2. comma needed before 'but'

'mail' - use 'letter' for physical mail; use 'e-mail' or 'message' for e-mail.

typo correction: America