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klafterreith
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 429
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Posted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 8:50 am Post subject: ecstasy is known for... |
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Please comment , don`t just correct the following sentence:
Does it make sense?
" a.Ecstasy is known for all-night-parties..." or must it be:
b. Ecstasy is associated with all-night-parties.
c. All-night-parties are known for ecstasy.
would a native speaker accept a.????????
Please help soon! |
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bud
Joined: 09 Mar 2003 Posts: 2111 Location: New Jersey, US
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Posted: Thu Dec 13, 2007 3:27 pm Post subject: |
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a. As is, I don't like it because it sounds like ecstasy is throwing (hosting) the parties. However, one minor change ("partying" instead of "parties") and it sounds like what you want - that people party all night long when they use ecstasy. "Ecstasy is known for all-night partying."
b. Yes.
c. No. This says that most all-night parties involve the use of ecstasy. But there are many reasons for all-night parties besides ecstasy use. |
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