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muni
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 Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2003 11:43 am Post subject: angry |
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You have not written to me for ages, I was expecting that you will reply to my mail but you didn't . Are you angry with me if there is something please tell me if you wil not tell me then how I will know that whats wrong with you
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Zanthrick
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Location: IA, USA
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| Posted: Thu Dec 25, 2003 8:33 pm Post subject: Re: angry |
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The punctuation could be better, but I'd say the general public would find it fine for an informal short letter with a few fixes. What stands out as strange to me is:
"..that you will reply.." ==> "...that you would reply"
"..how I will know that whats wrong.." ==> "..how will I know what's wrong?"
If I were to write something like the above it would be this:
You have not replied to my mail in ages. I'm worried that you are angry with me. Please tell me so that I will at least know what is going on.
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You have not written to me for ages, I was expecting that you will reply to my mail but you didn't . Are you angry with me if there is something please tell me if you wil not tell me then how I will know that whats wrong with you
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muni
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| Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 11:22 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for your help  |
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