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sejpdw
Joined: 26 Oct 2005 Posts: 217 Location: Korea
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 6:36 pm Post subject: diminished |
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Is it gramatically right to use "diminished" instead of "dwindled"?
" Paula Wilson, being just an ordinary white citizen of Riverside, California, gave a ride to black students to their new white schools with her car when school bus drivers went on strike to protest integration in the 1960s. Later on, she went out with a bucket of red paint to create some parking restrictions on dangerous curves in her neighborhood. When the city did not take care of a popular walking trail, she spent her weekends collecting trash from the sides of the road. She is now an 82-year-old woman. Recently, her many activities have [u]dwindled[/u] in number, but she still found the strength and energy to care for a terminally ill boy in her home." |
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MrPedantic
Joined: 02 Jan 2006 Posts: 116 Location: Southern England
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Posted: Sat Dec 15, 2007 4:47 am Post subject: |
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Hello Sej,
Yes, that would be fine. "Dwindled" can have a negative implication, but "diminished" is neutral.
Best wishes,
MrP |
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