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missdaredevil
Joined: 08 Dec 2004 Posts: 1670 Location: Ask me
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Posted: Tue Dec 25, 2007 8:59 pm Post subject: one questions |
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Hi teachers,
Would you tell me if there'sanything wrong with the structure of this sentence?
This thesis will provide references to universities on producing online materials or governmental agencies on promoting gender harmony.
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asterix
Joined: 26 Jan 2003 Posts: 1654
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Posted: Fri Dec 28, 2007 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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This thesis will provide references to universities on producing online materials, or to governmental agencies on promoting gender harmony.
If the thesis will provide references on producing online materials and on promoting gender harmony, why will it only be useful to universities and government? |
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