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Kenji Noda
Joined: 04 May 2007
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 Posted: Sun Dec 30, 2007 12:00 pm Post subject: sentence_31 dec 2007 |
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Dear teachers,
Please correct my sentences.
The wind has been blowing very hard from yesterday.
My flowers at my workplace might be damaged badly.
But I am in winter holiday; I am wondering whether I go there or not.
Watering to my flowers is another anxious.
Flowers might be wanting water being dried up.
Sincerely,
Kenji |
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Eric Thompson
Joined: 25 Nov 2006
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Location: Angeles, Pampanga, Philippines
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Hello Kenji: Here's is how I would correct your sentences. 1. The wind has been blowing hard since yesterday. 2. is OK. 3. I am wondering whether I will/should go there or not. 4. The watering of my flowers is another cause of anxiety. 5. The flowers might be dried up and need water. OK?  --Eric |
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Kenji Noda
Joined: 04 May 2007
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| Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:27 am Post subject: Thank you,Eric! |
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Eric, thank you very much!
I am learning little by little. |
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