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sabrinak
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 Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:29 pm Post subject: Does this sound natural or award? |
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Hi, I'm not sure about the follwing:
"All day at school, the young boy pushed and pulled his tooth. Suddenly it fell out."
What I want to know is whether "Suddenly" sounds okay or there's some better way of saying that?
As far as I know, "suddenly" means "unexpectly." Right?
I appreciate your help. |
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Lorikeet
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| Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:32 pm Post subject: Re: Does this sound natural or award? |
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I'd prefer, "All day at school, the young boy pushed and pulled his tooth. Finally it fell out."
You are right, "suddenly" seems unexpected. |
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