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hiromi525
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:15 am Post subject: The DEVIL WEARS PRADA |
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this passage is taken from the novel, The DEVIL WEARS PRADA
I have a question about the grammatical structure.
Where is the main verb in here?
or in this sentence the subject and the verb are inverted?
or using substantive ending.
Deep, pouty perfumes mixed with the smell of fresh leather to turn those elevators from the merely functional to the almost erotic.
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Bob S.

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Posts: 1767 Location: So. Cal
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Posted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 1:00 pm Post subject: |
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The subject is perfumes.
The verb is mixed.
With the smell is an adverbial prepositional phrase modifying mixed (answers the question "how?").
To turn those elevators is an infinitive adverbial phrase modifying mixed (answers the question "why?").
From functional and to erotic are adverbial prepositional phrases modifying turn. |
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hiromi525
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 12:24 am Post subject: The DEVIL WEARS PRADA |
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Thank to you, I almost understand this.
You are saying that main verb is mixed which means past tense.
Now, I comprehend what the author says.
Would it be possible to intend to use mixed as the past participle.
Deep, pouty perfumes (which is) mixed with the smell of fresh leather to turn those elevators from the merely functional to the almost erotic.
I've ever heard "which is" can be omitted in some cases.
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Bob S.

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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 10:36 am Post subject: Re: The DEVIL WEARS PRADA |
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| hiromi525 wrote: |
| Would it be possible to intend to use mixed as the past participle. |
Yes, you can say:
Perfumes are mixed...
Perfumes have been mixed...
Perfumes were mixed...
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Deep, pouty perfumes (which is) mixed with the smell of fresh leather to turn those elevators from the merely functional to the almost erotic.
I've ever heard "which is" can be omitted in some cases. |
Mmm, not exactly. Which is/are mixed is an adjective phrase that would modify perfume, then your sentence would lose its verb. You still would need something to be your verb.
For example:
The house painted green is haunted.
The house which is painted green is haunted.
Your core sentence is The house is haunted. Which is painted green is an adjective.
So our original sentence could be rewritten as:
Perfumes {which are} mixed with the smell of leather permeates the air. Then perfumes is your subject and permeates becomes your verb, mixed with the smell of leather (with or without which are) becomes an adjective phrase. |
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