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[Kenji Noda]

Dear teachers,
I wrote a poem without knowing anything about how to make poems.
Please check it.

Bliss of Spring
by Kenji Noda

Sweet in the wind,
Green of the grass,
Twittering comes
A little bird.

Bright in the meadow,
Dew of the blade,
Whispering comes
A little bee.

Yellow is the stream
Of glittering buttercup.

Violet is the hope
Of glimmering pansy.

Oh, slowly
Oh, calmly
flow my Spring

Oh, happily
Oh, delightfully
flow my Spring.


Thanks

[Philo Kevetch]

Hello Kenji Noda -

Your poem stirred my spirit and awoke me to the pleasure of spring un-folding around me.

Thanks for making my day a little brighter. Philo