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tisogai
Joined: 09 Feb 2006 Posts: 196
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 6:32 am Post subject: proofreading, please #2 |
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Please correct anything you find wrong or out of place.
Thanks so much.
1. What is my strength?---
I'm a hard worker. I like to set a goal and always do my best to reach it by taking practical steps. I alway prepare throughly for school exams. I also like to meet challenges. I'm an adaptable person to new enviroments, so I'm sure I'll enjoy this programe.
2. Personality (likes and dislikes? what do I do in my spare time?)--
I like sports. I'm in the futsal club at school. I like spending my freetime playing tennnis with my sister and friends. I like to learn new things.
3. Health--
I have no allergy. I need no special health care. I'm in excellent health. |
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Suzanne
Joined: 21 Apr 2008 Posts: 283 Location: Seattle, WA, USA
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 4:30 pm Post subject: |
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A couple of things to ask you, please:
1. Is this the format that you are supposed to follow? Did the questions come in this way?
2. Do you know if you are supposed to write a paragraph, or make a list for each question? |
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tisogai
Joined: 09 Feb 2006 Posts: 196
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks. Yes, pretty much the same. The other post regarding "GM food" I had put and you've just replied to is going to be #3 below.
The whole thing is like this;
1. Name
2. Birthdate
3. Motivation- Why do I think this programme is important for me?
4. Expectation- What do I want to gain from this programme?
5. Aspiration- What is my dream? What do I like to do in future?
6. Strength- What is my strength? Why do I think I will be a good participant?
7. Personality- What are my hobbies? Likes and dislikes? What do I like to do im my spare time?etc.
8. Health-Are you allergic to anything? Do you need a special health care?
To me #4 and 5 are somehow overlap, so I'm still thinking how to answer.... |
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tisogai
Joined: 09 Feb 2006 Posts: 196
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Forgot to answer the other question;
No, not that strict as to what style. I'm allowed to write in the way I want to.
Thanks. |
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