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proofreading #3, please

 
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tisogai



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PostPosted: Thu May 08, 2008 6:58 am    Post subject: proofreading #3, please Reply with quote
Would you please check the grammar. Thanks so much.

I would like to work abroad using English in the future, specifically in the field of diplomatic relations. Although it has little to do with Biotechnology, I view this programme as a great opportunity to broaden my holizon, which I think necessary for the field. I am sure this programme will be a very precious experience bacause I can have experiments, presentations, and a visit to a nature reservation. I am also excited about that I can visit an another country and experience crosscultural interactions. I am very fortunate to be able to learn with and from the students with much aspiration. I will make good use of what I learn through this programme in my future life and career.

Thanks so much.
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Lorikeet



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PostPosted: Mon May 12, 2008 7:50 pm    Post subject: Re: proofreading #3, please Reply with quote
tisogai wrote:
Would you please check the grammar. Thanks so much.

I would like to work abroad using English in the future, specifically in the field of diplomatic relations. Although it has little to do with Biotechnology, I view this programme as a great opportunity to broaden my holizon, which I think necessary for the field. I am sure this programme will be a very precious experience bacause I can have experiments, presentations, and a visit to a nature reservation. I am also excited about that I can visit an another country and experience crosscultural interactions. I am very fortunate to be able to learn with and from the students with much aspiration. I will make good use of what I learn through this programme in my future life and career.

Thanks so much.

In the future, I would like to work abroad using English, specifically in the field of diplomatic relations. Although it has little to do with Biotechnology, I view this programme as a great opportunity to broaden my horizons, which I think is necessary for my field. I am sure this programme will be a very precious experience because I can have experiments, presentations, and a visit to a nature reserve. I am also excited that I can visit another country and experience crosscultural interactions. I am very fortunate to be able to learn with and from the aspiring students. I will make good use of what I learn through this programme in my future life and career.

I would like to work abroad in the future,
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