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klafterreith
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 Posted: Sun May 11, 2008 1:15 am Post subject: prescribed |
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-She got some drugs prescribed. O / W
Is the `got described� okay?
-Her parent recognized her self-made injuries. O /W
-Her journey of getting well again atarted after Easter. O/W
Please don`t forget to indicate O/W . Please let me know where exactly the serious mistakes are.
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Philo Kevetch
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O/W...??? If - (O) = okay and (W) = wrong - then
a - (O)...but, 'had' would be better.
b - (O)..but, 'self-inflicted' would be better.
c - (O)...but, 'journey to getting...' (ex.-road to recovery) would be better.
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Didn't you ask the same question (b) in 'self-made/self-inflicted' posted on May 11? |
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