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ClarissaMach

Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 644 Location: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 12:43 pm Post subject: Revising a composition IV |
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Here I am again!!!
This time I'm supposed to write a letter of application to an international magazine advertisement, answering the following questions:
What do you think are the advantages for a student of staying with a host family compared with college accommodation?
What qualities is it necessary for a successful host family to have?
Why would you like to host international students?
Dear Mr Martin from Hosts International Ltd.,
I am writing in reply to the advertisement �Host families wanted�, where you asked a few questions that I have answered below.
I think that spending sometime with a family instead of staying in a college accommodation gives the international student a real chance of fully experiencing the way of life of the country he/she is staying in. This certainly amplifies his/her understanding of the country�s culture. Besides, I believe that it is easier for some students to deal with the distance from their own family if they are hosted with another.
About the qualities a successful host family must have, I think that above all it must be highly sympathetic and willing to offer a very good experience to the students. All the family members must have agreed over the decision of hosting an international student and be prepared to deal with a person that might come from a culture completely different from theirs. Otherwise, things might end up in a really bad experience both for the host family and its guest.
I would like to host international students myself because I see it as a very enriching experience. Hosting international students might allow one and its family to get in contact with bright foreign nationals that could bring a new perspective over life. I believe an experience like this would help broadening my children�s mind about the world. Besides, it is also a good way to develop friendships all around the world without leaving home. _________________ Stormy Weather. |
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Bob S.

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Posts: 1767 Location: So. Cal
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Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:03 pm Post subject: Re: Revising a composition IV |
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A few small items:
I think that spending some time (2 words, not 1) with a family...
Hosting international students might allow one and his or her family... (don't use neuter it pronoun when referring to a person)
...this would help broadening my children�s minds about the world. (children is plural, so mind should be plural also)
That's all that really stand out. |
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ClarissaMach

Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 644 Location: Rio de Janeiro, Brazil
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Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2008 6:04 am Post subject: |
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Thanks a lot, Bob! _________________ Stormy Weather. |
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