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leslie
Joined: 12 Oct 2005 Posts: 244
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:39 pm Post subject: but....not included |
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Is the following sentence correc?
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but not included product presentations.
If not, can I re-write it as:
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but product presentations not included.
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but product presentations are not included.
Can the verb after 'but' omit sometimes?
Any comment is welcom!!
Leslie _________________ Less Is Blessed |
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Bob S.

Joined: 29 Apr 2004 Posts: 1767 Location: So. Cal
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 3:17 pm Post subject: Re: but....not included |
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| leslie wrote: |
Is the following sentence correct?
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but not included product presentations. |
Not quite. In this case, but functions as a preposition, so the verb form should function as a noun object of the preposition which means you need a gerund including.
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If not, can I re-write it as:
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but product presentations not included.
Please help us postpone all the interviews before September, but product presentations are not included. |
The second sentence works fine.
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Can the verb after 'but' omit sometimes?
Any comment is welcome!! |
Yes, you can simply write but not product presentations. In that case, but-not is a conjunction: postpone all interviews but not presentations, and that actually gives the sentence better balance and better flow. _________________ "It is impossible to speak in such a way that you cannot be misunderstood." -- Karl Popper |
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