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Chan-Seung Lee
Joined: 03 Dec 2005 Posts: 1032
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 4:30 am Post subject: the best taste |
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1.It gives us the best quality of the taste to eat as soon as pizza cooks.
2.It gives us the best taste to eat as soon as pizza is cooked.
3.It gives us the best taste to eat right after pizza cooks.
4.It makes a pizza the best taste to eat as soon as pizza cooks.
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I made up several sentences in order to express the same meaning.
1.Do they make sense?
2.If not , could you pinpoint my fault?
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Bluegum
Joined: 26 Oct 2008 Posts: 89 Location: Melbourne
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Posted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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They could all be understood, but it's awkward to use "it gives". Using 'taste' as a verb would be simpler:
Pizza tastes best if it's eaten as soon as it's cooked. |
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