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klafterreith
Joined: 25 Nov 2005 Posts: 429
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:44 am Post subject: start by valuing |
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(About family policy): Politicans should start by valuing today`s families rather than judging/judge them.
I know that `by......� requires the -ing form but is the structure `... judge them� also possible in that sentence? (The meaning of the sentence would be slightly different)
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Suzanne
Joined: 21 Apr 2008 Posts: 283 Location: Seattle, WA, USA
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 7:19 am Post subject: |
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If you are going to start an an -ing phrase, it makes a better sentence to say "rather than judging them."
If you use "judge" then more needs to be said:
Example:
Politicans should start by valuing today's families rather than judge them by their religious beliefs.
Or, try this:
Politicians should value today's families rather than judge them by their religious beliefs. |
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klafterreith
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Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2009 10:49 pm Post subject: start by valuing |
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Would you say that
They should start by valuing today`s families rather than judge them
is totally wrong or still acceptable?
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Suzanne
Joined: 21 Apr 2008 Posts: 283 Location: Seattle, WA, USA
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Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 7:58 am Post subject: |
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"They should start by valuing today`s families rather than judge them" is quite acceptable!
Good job! |
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