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lenin95
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 Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 10:22 pm Post subject: formulation |
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I'm trying to formulate this thought properly and having a hard time with it. Could you please help?
"It's not only what you once did, but what you do now people will respect you for."
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"It's not only what you once did, but what you do now you'll be respected for."
It sounds awkward to me and I'm not sure what to do with it.
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dragn
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How does this grab you:
"People will respect you not only for what you did, but for what you do."
Or more succinctly:
"People respect not only what you did, but what you do."
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lenin95
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| Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Thanks, Greg! I really appreciate that. |
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