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gusthuber
Joined: 18 Mar 2010 Posts: 89
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 11:28 am Post subject: punched |
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A shark bit around and punched its tail.
Is the sentence acceptable or totally wrong? |
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pugachevV
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Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 1:13 pm Post subject: |
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It's not really making sense, the way it is written.
The shark thrashed its tail and gnashed its teeth, may be what you want. |
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