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Chan-Seung Lee

Joined: 03 Dec 2005
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:55 am Post subject: if and when

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My fellow shareholders. If you remember the last time I addressed you a year ago, our news was frustrating as we had a disappointing year.

1.Does the bold part make sense?
2.Instead, how about 'When you remember the last time I addressed you a year ago' ?

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pugachevV

Joined: 16 Jan 2003
Posts: 2295

Posted: Tue Apr 20, 2010 3:40 am Post subject:

It would make sense if there were commas where there should be...If you remember, the last time I addressed you, a year ago, our news was frustrating, as we had had a disappointing year.

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