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Chan-Seung Lee



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 5:48 pm    Post subject: and Reply with quote
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1. It is no good talking about the greatness of Korea, pretending to be proud of it, unless we who live in the country do somehting to make it great, and of which we, and those who come after us, have a right to be proud.
2. It is no good talking about the greatness of Korea, pretending to be proud of it, unless we who live in the country do somehting to make it great, of which we, and those who come after us, have a right to be proud.


Which one is better, #1 or #2?

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educe22



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PostPosted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
IMHO: Number two is better. The word "and" in Number one is superfluous and doesn't enhance the meaning or intent of the sentence.
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